SAYS (Advertorial)

by Jane Law Lee Bin (0334317)

(Source: SAYS)

Opinion: This is an advertorial from SAYS about a list of Valentine's promo offered by F&B outlets in Selangor. In my opinion, I think this article is written well as it is short, concise and consists of a comprehensive, diverse list of food outlets that offers sweet deals. This helps the readers who are searching for food outlets to celebrate Valentines with their dates as everything is in one place. The straightforward writing style also makes the article easy to read and digest.

Copy Strategy: I think the headline is catchy enough that it made me click into it to read the article and check out which shops offer promos. It is a great article for people who are planning to bring out their dates to eat but would also like to save money at the same time. It saves time for readers who are looking for food outlets because everything is in one place. I also like how the choices in this article are very diverse as the list includes ice cream, pizza, burgers, beverages, and so on.

Reimagined Copy

Headline: Treat Your Valentines to These Romantic Deals

Subheadline: Promo deals that would definitely capture your date's heart

Reference:

Razif, S., 2020. FamilyMart, MyBurgerLab, Pizza Hut & Other Valentine's Day Promos You Don't Wanna Miss [Online] SAYS. Available at: <https://says.com/my/makan/valentine-s-day-food-promos-are-here> [Accessed 8 November 2020].